marinliliz: ([Bleach] - Ichigo)
marinliliz ([personal profile] marinliliz) wrote2008-02-13 08:36 pm

[Drabble] - My Strawberry Valentine

[Title]: My Strawberry Valentine
[Characters]: Abarai Renji and Kurosaki Ichigo
[Summary]: Ichigo doesn't really care for strawberries but Renji seems to really like them.
[Word Count]: 385
[Finished]: 09.February.2008
[Beta]: Not beta-read
[Warnings]: This will make a lot more sense if you're aware that strawberry in Japanese, is ICHIGO.
[Notes]: I didn't say this before but in order to write these Valentine's drabbles, I wrote down a series of pairings and went looking for inspiration. This mini-comic was what  inspired this drabble, well the top panel, really.


Disclaimer: Do not own Bleach and will not make a profit out of this fic. All characters©Kubo Tite


Ichigo stared at the plastic box, neatly wrapped in red cellophane, set in front of him on the kitchen table. “And what am I suppose to do with this, Renji?”

 

Renji looked puzzled. “You unwrap it and see what’s inside!” He added condescendingly, “it’s called a present.”

 

“What’s the point?” Ichigo shrugged. “I already know what’s inside. I can see it through the wrapping. It’s just strawberries!” He pointed out the obvious.

 

“So you unwrap it and eat them!” Renji was getting impatience. What was his problem? Hadn’t he heard of Valentine’s Day gifts?

 

“I don’t like strawberries,” the substitute shinigami clarified, “so there really isn’t a point to me opening it, is there? It would just spoil them.” The orange-haired boy moved away.

 

“Fine! Suit yourself, then,” Renji replied, annoyed, sating at the table and unwrapping the box with the fruit and taking one out.

 

Ichigo watched from the door as Renji, sitting at the table, gulped strawberry after strawberry. “What ’r you doin’?” he asked, incensed by the display of flippancy shown to the strawberry.

 

“Exactly what it looks like. Eating strawberries,” Renji answered, grinning, while biting the next and raising his eyebrows.

 

Ichigo sat in the chair next to Renji’s and pointed to the box. “Weren’t those supposed to be a present for me?”

 

“You don’t like strawberries!” Renji replied in the same tone Ichigo had used before. “And seeing as I really like them…” He gulped another one.

 

“At least you should eat them properly!” Ichigo took a strawberry from the plastic box and explained: “You have to hold it firmly, but gently.” He licked the narrow side and the bit the red fruit.

 

Renji gulped, his eyes not missing a thing of what was going on between Ichigo and that strawberry.

 

“Then you lick the yummy, squishy interior, where the strawberry is the sweetest.” Ichigo did so in demonstration.

 

Renji groaned, the jeans, he’d been using here in the Real World, tightened considerably at the sight before him. A drop of the fruit’s juice escaped Ichigo’s lower lip and trickled down his chin; Renji lunged at the orange-haired boy, holding his arms, firmly but gently and then licking the wayward drop and tasting the strawberry in Ichigo’s mouth, sucking the tongue and biting the lips.

 

“What’ch doin’?”

 

“Eating strawberry properly.”

February2008©MarinLiliz

[identity profile] madrona-8.livejournal.com 2008-02-13 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
**turns into something like the squishy interior of the strawberry" ahhhh

[identity profile] sommar.livejournal.com 2008-02-13 10:14 pm (UTC)(link)
oh my... my mind must be so fried LOL
everytime you wrote (eating) strawberries in a sentence my mind just went *poof* LOLOLOL

yesyes Renji... listen to Ichigo and eat strawberries the way they deserve to be eaten...

(I sooo need to sleep XD, this fic is just sooooo dirty to my tired brain XDXDXD)
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach] - Ichigo)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2008-02-13 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, don't let Renji get you. Or then again, let him>.<
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach] - Ichigo)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2008-02-13 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Your poor tired mind, can't even handle an innocent little fic.XD
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach] - Ichigo)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2008-02-13 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks;]

[identity profile] nnoi.livejournal.com 2008-02-13 11:12 pm (UTC)(link)
he he he he I love this!!!

[identity profile] youkai-girl.livejournal.com 2008-02-14 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
Loved every second of it. ^_^ I may never be able to look at a strawberry the same.

[identity profile] chibitsunade.livejournal.com 2008-02-14 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
ZOMG!!!! I so love it. <333
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach]- Renji)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2008-02-14 02:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you enjoyed it^^
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach] - Ichigo)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2008-02-14 02:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I've been looking at strawberries differently for a while now>.<
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach]- Renji)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2008-02-14 02:06 pm (UTC)(link)
XD Very glad you did. Thanks;]

[identity profile] haruyan.livejournal.com 2008-02-14 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
GOD I LOVE IT!! So cute~!!
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach] - Ichigo)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2008-02-14 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Sankyu~

[identity profile] annieroo2.livejournal.com 2008-02-15 04:28 am (UTC)(link)
*eyes cross repeatedly* That was.... I am speechless apparently. I will never be able to eat a strawberry again without thinking about Renji licking Ichigo. Sigh...

[identity profile] only-gremo.livejournal.com 2008-02-15 11:21 am (UTC)(link)
Yay to the deliciousness of strawberries! I guess, Renji thinks the same ways.

I loved this drabble! ^-^
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach] - Ichigo)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2008-02-15 01:45 pm (UTC)(link)
This little drabble seems to be having that effect on people.I like it, when the things my crazy mind comes up with, have an influence on how others view things, even if on a very small scale.
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach] - Ichigo)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2008-02-15 01:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, Renji is really into strawberries these days.XD Glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] marionetteblue3.livejournal.com 2008-06-24 09:54 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh, naughty Renji >.<

Better not have any thoughts, ne =3


ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach]- Renji)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2008-06-24 06:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Ichigo was so asking for it but then it all backfired.;]